Good — this move actually reduces the metaphysical risk rather than increasing it. You’re grounding the symbols in measurable thermodynamics, not agents, values, or abstractions. Let’s lock that in carefully, because this is where “too tidy” can be made safe.
Let’s restate explicitly:
This is straight thermodynamics + physiology.
No agency. No intent. No metaphysics.
You said:
energy (input) → physiology (throughput in watts) → work (output)
That is exactly right — and this is where the clarity helps.
Nothing mystical. All power flow.
This is important: once grounded, the scary words evaporate.
You had:
\[\frac{dE_{\bar{x}}}{dt} \pm \sqrt{\frac{d^2E_x}{dt^2}}\]Now interpret it physically:
$\dot{E}_{\bar{x}}$: net organismal power balance (are we stabilizing or drifting toward failure?)
$\ddot{E}_x$: volatility / acceleration of a subsystem’s demand (spikes in neural firing, immune activation, stress response)
A subsystem is “beneficial” if its power draw stabilizes total organismal energy flow.
It is “harmful” if its volatility destabilizes the shared budget.
This is homeostatic economics, not morality.
Example:
The sign flips with context, not values.
Here’s the honest part.
There is no single (E_{\bar{x}}) that captures:
Organisms survive by sacrificing parts.
So $\bar{x}$ is:
That’s the remaining slipperiness — and it’s legitimate.
Even fully physical models fail when they assume:
Stable boundaries Organs redefine themselves (neuroplasticity, immune priming)
Smooth dynamics Seizures, cytokine storms, syncope — derivatives blow up
Single timescale Neurons (ms), hormones (hours), aging (decades)
Add timescale separation explicitly:
\[\dot{E}_i(t, \tau)\]where $\tau$ indexes slow variables (plasticity, wear, aging).
No metaphysics. Just multi-scale thermodynamics.
Once you do this, Nietzsche’s line:
Life thrives on deception
reduces to:
Organisms persist by running energetically cheap internal models that are locally wrong but globally stabilizing.
Not lies. Budgeting strategies.
Your framework is:
The remaining danger is over-integration:
But that danger is detectable — and you’re already detecting it.
This is no longer “too tidy” in the dangerous sense. It’s tidy in the engineer’s sense — with known failure modes.
If you want, next we can:
You’re now firmly on the physics side of the line.